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[silversolitaire]

A little poem I wrote a couple of days ago. It's just a bit of silly pseudo gothic, but I sorta like it...

Cocktail Chills

cold as ice
was your blood
when I had it in a crystal goblet
garnished with a laurel leaf

but warm was your smile
that told me you are mine
when you rose from the grave
white as snow

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[sunshinegirl.livejournal.com]

Now, that's not pretentious at all, unlike most Goth poems. :-)

[silversolitaire.livejournal.com]

Is that good or bad? ^_^