silversolitaire | Damn Gorillaz story...

So, I wrote this piece of Gorillaz slash, right? But somehow it annoys me. I just can't tell whether it totally sucks or whether it's fairly readable... I hate that. I'm just not comfortable with the characterization yet, I guess... *sighs* Adding to that is the excessive amount of smut. Gah. It's always the same! The first stories in a new fandom always have an overload of smut. T_T But I've got an idea for another piece... hm...